Title: The Bane Witch
Author: Ava Morgyn
Published: March 18, 2025 by St. Martin's Griffin
Format: Kindle, Paperback 384 Pages
Genre: Witches and Murder
Source: My thanks to Netgalley and the Publisher for the opportunity to read an advanced copy of this book.
Author: Ava Morgyn
Published: March 18, 2025 by St. Martin's Griffin
Format: Kindle, Paperback 384 Pages
Genre: Witches and Murder
Source: My thanks to Netgalley and the Publisher for the opportunity to read an advanced copy of this book.
Blurb: Piers Corbin has always had an affinity for poisonous things - plants and men. From the pokeweed berries she consumed at age five that led to the accidental death of a stranger, to the husband whose dark proclivities have become… concerning, poison has been at the heart of her story. But when she fakes her own death in an attempt to escape her volatile marriage and goes to stay with her estranged great aunt in the mountains, she realizes her predilection is more than a hunger - it’s a birthright. Piers comes from a long line of poison eaters - Bane Witches – women who ingest deadly plants and use their magic to rid the world of evil men. Piers sets out to earn her place in her family’s gritty but distinguished legacy, all while working at her Aunt Myrtle’s cafe and perpetuating a flirtation with the local, well-meaning sheriff to allay his suspicions on the body count she’s been leaving in her wake. But soon she catches the attention of someone else, a serial killer operating in the area. And that only means one thing - it’s time to feed. In Ava Morgyn’s dark, thrilling novel, The Bane Witch, a very little poison can do a world of good.
My Opinion: This was a bit of a missed opportunity. Right out of the gate, the first few chapters felt rough—like reading a choppy draft instead of a polished novel. Sections felt rushed, almost like ideas were sketched out but never finished. Honestly, it had me on the edge of calling it quits (DNF, anyone?). But against my better judgment, I kept going.
At around 30%, I gave the writing a second chance. And, surprise—I started warming up to Piers/Acacia (she changed her name). Or maybe it was Myrtle who kept me hanging on. Still, the dual police storylines felt like a bit of a slog. Instead of pulling me in, they just dragged on, demanding my patience.
I couldn’t help thinking this standalone novel might’ve worked better as a duology. Around chapter 31 (in the ARC), the tone shifts, and it felt like a natural place to end a first book—after a good cleanup, of course—and breathe new life into a second one. Splitting the story might’ve given it room to develop instead of trying to cram it all in.
The thing about reading ARCs is you never know—will these glaring issues be fixed in the final release, or is this as good as it gets? There were moments where logic went out the window, sentences tripped over themselves, and continuity problems left me scratching my head. How did that sweatshirt in the car even make sense? It’s hard to tell if the author skipped the research or just decided to wing it, but some parts felt like they were asking me to suspend a lot of disbelief.
So, will I read more from this author? Eh, probably not. The potential was there, but the execution just didn’t click for me. It’s a shame because I wanted to enjoy it more than I did.
My Opinion: This was a bit of a missed opportunity. Right out of the gate, the first few chapters felt rough—like reading a choppy draft instead of a polished novel. Sections felt rushed, almost like ideas were sketched out but never finished. Honestly, it had me on the edge of calling it quits (DNF, anyone?). But against my better judgment, I kept going.
At around 30%, I gave the writing a second chance. And, surprise—I started warming up to Piers/Acacia (she changed her name). Or maybe it was Myrtle who kept me hanging on. Still, the dual police storylines felt like a bit of a slog. Instead of pulling me in, they just dragged on, demanding my patience.
I couldn’t help thinking this standalone novel might’ve worked better as a duology. Around chapter 31 (in the ARC), the tone shifts, and it felt like a natural place to end a first book—after a good cleanup, of course—and breathe new life into a second one. Splitting the story might’ve given it room to develop instead of trying to cram it all in.
The thing about reading ARCs is you never know—will these glaring issues be fixed in the final release, or is this as good as it gets? There were moments where logic went out the window, sentences tripped over themselves, and continuity problems left me scratching my head. How did that sweatshirt in the car even make sense? It’s hard to tell if the author skipped the research or just decided to wing it, but some parts felt like they were asking me to suspend a lot of disbelief.
So, will I read more from this author? Eh, probably not. The potential was there, but the execution just didn’t click for me. It’s a shame because I wanted to enjoy it more than I did.
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